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It's a monster! I pixeled it. I'm pretty proud of it but I'm looking for some major heavy critique!

Download it so see an enlarged version. :)

Finished Version: [link]

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:iconaiarashi:
Kinda looks like a classic Final Fantasy monster. Although the colors make it look like it's from a Game Boy game, maybe adding some more color would do it good.
As for the monster itself, it looks very nice. ^^

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:iconsererena:
Yeah, I was thinking of just changing the color of the hair and tusks to give it a bit more interest.

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:iconxmalefactorx:
Your pixeling totally pwns mine x_x

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:iconaiarashi:
That's a nice idea. Id' say do it.

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:iconeimhin:
I dig the drab color, but Aiarashi is right- for something this small, WOW is necessary. Eyecatching color. : )

And did you ever consider patterning the body? Stripes, spots, warts, whatever?

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:iconvatina:
Oooh monster :D I really like it, it looks good! As others said, some more colorin could perhaps help. But otherwise I have no critique ^^

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:iconsererena:
That's a good idea... Some stripes on his back would look great!

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:icontaiya001:
awsome i cant even draw a troll

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:icondamaged927:
Working on a game perhaps?

I like it, but depending on if it is going to be in a game, if it is not like a final fantasy game, it is going to be a nightmare to animate:)

Otherwise, great depth for the hind legs and I like the lack of a black border (thats one thing I can't seem to get away from), it gives it a very SNES feel to it. Also, the definition of the muscles is very tight, you can tell it is a strong beast.

Personally, I may have gone for a bit of a lighter color in the tusks to give them more definition, perhaps a grayish/white color.

Enjoy,
Damaged

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